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Steel Pampers - заварил кашу

переводческая часть: любой из вас =)
техническая часть: Steel Pampers

сделано:
в технической части:
- судя по скринам из этого сообщения, почти ВСЁ;
- добавить букву "ё" в уже перерисованные шрифты;
- перерисовать ещё один шрифт.
в переводческой части:
- выполнены перевод и редактирование текстов;
- выполнен черновой перевод дневника главного героя;
- открыт проект перевода на нотабеноиде (в настоящее время актуальна только глава с "дневником". остальной текст редактируется в закрытом разделе "Бюро переводов").

необходимо сделать:
в переводческой части:
- перевести руководство пользователя.

скачать извлечённый текст можно из этого сообщения.

скриншоты смотрим во вложениях.

 

У меня нет сомнений, что это те самые исходники.

 

Жду с нетерпением.

 

Качество перевода пока что удручающее. Именно поэтому я не хотел доверять его сообществу, но обратно пути, видимо, уже нет.

 

Если хочешь чтобы работа по переводу встала, продолжай постить подобные сообщения. )
Это тонкая материя. Люди за идею работают. Никто ведь не мешает потом это редактировать.

 

http://scummvm.org/news/20121021/

Теперь перевод даже не будет пиратским.

 

Статус free тут причем? Ковыряние ресурсов = пиратство, не?

 

[mention]TERMiN8![/mention] , нет. "Потому что для пиратство нужен корабль, море-океан и абордажная команда."(c)Баш

 

Друзья, извините, может быть, за неправильный вопрос, но вроде весь текст на Нотабеноиде переведен. За какой трудностью "встала" дальнейшая реализация проекта?

P.S.: Очень жду перевод, спасибо всем, кто к нему причастен.

 

Тексты с нотабеноида:

 

Всем привет!
Присоединяюсь к BoBeR_Roman, как можно узнать статус этого проекта?
Перевод готов на 98%, готова добить и до 100% ))
Если есть вопросы по переводу Dreamweb, я тут )
Жаль, что нотабеноид прикрыли...

 

на странице игры можно скачать интересный дневничок главного героя. в связи с тем, что качество скана местами вызывает грусть, а текст самого дневника, как полагается, написан от руки, я попытался набить текст для более удобной работы по его переводу. однако, какие-то слова я не разобрал, какие-то явно набрал с опечатками. поэтому выкладываю под кат то, что у меня получилось, чтобы все желающие смогли помочь максимально приблизить содержимое к оригиналу и/или поучаствовать в переводе.

несколько пояснений по тексту: в квадратных скобках "[]" находится то, что в оригинале зачёркнуто, ряд минусов "-------" не понятые мной слова.

и кстати, содержимое дневника, по-моему, позволяет очень неслабо проникнуться атмосферой игры.

под кат

Wednesday. March 28
Ryan.
There. The first entry in the journal. My own name.
The time is 11-45 a.m. precisely.
I don't know why I bought this journal. Come to think of it, I don't know why I'm writing in it. Never kept a journal before, not even those little diaries when I was a kid. I won't write about the dreams - not in detail. I'm not commiting my nightmares to paper.
NEVER!
Enough of that.
If anyone's interested, I was twenty-six last Monday. I didn't celebrate the birthday. Now what shall I say? Am I writing this, in my neatest hand, for myself, or someone else? Eden, perhaps? No. Not Eden. I love her - at least I think I do, but I wouldn't w[h]ant her to know ALL my secrets. Am I penning this for myself? Yes - in part, but only in part. To someone out there, who'll maybe read this in fifty years when I'm dead?


Or even for a stranger's eye in a remote future epoch - ten, twenty thousand years from now, when I'm a nobody of ancient history, one more item on the archaeological list? Who are you, anyway? I wonder what you're like, reader.
Funny - I hadn't meant to wonder off like that. Let's [started] DAMN, my first mistake, and on the second page.
As I was saying... let's start with today...
I was browsing through one of those old curio shops in Rackham Lane, looking forwell nothing in particular, when I saw this old, dark green leather-bound journal with an embossed pattern down the side in a faded golden colour.
What is it they call that fancy patterning?
Toding, I think. Whatever. The book lay there on a back shelf, smelling slightly musty, as old as the century. The off-white pages inside, like old snow, begged to be covered in marks, I recall th journal was beside one of those glass globes that whirt up a snowstorm when you shake them.
Jeez - why did I bother to slip in that little observation? Who cares? I'm still not sure why I bought the journal, but then, we all do things for no good reson almost every day, don't we? Or is it just me? No, I don't think I'm that unique.
I got a pen to go with the journal, one with a nib that you stick in an ink bottle. An old-fashioned pen for an old-fashioned book. Out of character, Eden would say if she knew. Louis - he's a friend, of sorts - would say the same. Shows how much even lovers and friends know about you. I'm supposed to be this streetwise, [life] live-for-the moment guy, whatever the hell that's supposed to mean. But weall ave our hidden sides, all of us. No, scrub that last thought...live just remembered a whole batch of creeps that have crossed my path over the years - they didn't have ANY hidden sides.

The TV's on, in the corner of the room. There's some jerk just come on the screen, one of those mainstream rock stars in his late twenties, wearing a watch that'd cost me, and most people, a years wages. Is this fair? If you think so, youre either rich or crazy. Okay, some perfomers are talented, but David Crane, leadsinger of Araknophobia, sure as hell isn't one of them. But maybe you're a fan, and want to strangle me with a guitar string. (It's add how I keep writing as though some stranger's going to read this, but maybe all [diari] diarists do that. Wouldn't know, I'm new ti this game.)
Well, it's late, theres nothing on the box and the bed looks inviting.
Last night, I dreamt thet I murdered a man.
Strange things, dreams...

Thursday March 29
8.30 in te evening and all's well.
Works over for thr day and - No. I wont talk about work. I'm, glancing around my that at the moment. It's scruffer than usual, considering Eden will be here in an hour. She's always trying to get me to tidy up. The bathroom isn't too much of a mess - I can see into it from my table near the window. The kitchen doors open too. The kitchen's pretty clean, by my standards - all I ever use is the microwave. Microvawe Man. As for the half a dozen students lived in it. Stained walls. Dusty almost-wall-to-wall carpets. The carpet has it's decorations-screwed-up socks and crumpled beer cans and cigarette stubs that have somehow escaped the ashtrays.
Uh-oh-I've just spotted a rubber under the bed. So THAT'S where it got to. Be back in a moment...
[HERE] [Her again] Here again. The flat's a lot tidier now. Sorting out the rubber got me going on the rest of the place.

Eden is coming round, after all - got to show willing. Still looks a dump, though. She won't be wildly impressed. I've never understood what she sees in me. She's definitely up-market. You should see her apartment. Plush, plush and more plush. You can tell she's in a high-flier job. Something to do with communications consultancy and P.R. I don't ask. She's always going on at me to get a proper job. Has no-one told her there aren't that many jobs around? Serving booze in Sparky's Bar isn't MY cherished vocation, either. That's it - I've said it - I'm a barman. And Sparky my boss, is an overweight, hairy slob. The type that walks around isi a string vest.
You know the kind? Yeah, sure you do I've just looked out of the window, down at the street. The window-panes are grubby, if you hand't already guessed. It's raining and the street is smeared yellow with the lights of Sodium lamps. There are a lot of figures in raincoats down there, doing Somewhere or nowhere. I read once that most people live lives of quiet desperation. Could be true. God, this flat's empty without Eden. But shell soon fill it, with her perfume, her voice, her presence. She promised she'd stay tonight. I can see her now on the bed, pale and smooth and slow and easy, her black hair long and lazy on the pillow. When she's naked, she has the eyes of a child. Then, in the morning, she dresses for work, and she's someone else.
Sometimes I love Eden. Sometimes I don't. But when she's not around, I always miss her. I reckon most people are like that.
Well, I'm not writing any more today. Signing off, or whatever diarists are supposed ti say.
Me again. It's after midnight. Eden didn't come. She phoned, made her apologies, explaining about work-loads and dead-line. I said I didn't mind. I'm a good liar when I want to be. Ten minutes later, Louis turned up, scratching his needle-scrabs anf asking if I wanted any drugs. I haven't touched that stuff in years, but he keeps on asking.

Louis for Eden.
Not much of a trade. He started to babbke about imaginary spiders, brushing them off his sleeves. I had to kick him out.
I watched TV for an hour. It was a programme on serial killers. No, I'm not especially [homici] morbid. There's been this serial killer scering hell out of the city for the past few months. The media have dubbed him the Dealer because he has this thing about playing cards and -
No, I don't feel like writing about the Dealer tonight.
It's still raiming, and the street below is deserted. Everywhere, there's a gap that's shaped like Eden.
I don't qhant to write about the dreams.
I've been staring ay the bed - it's not inviting tonight.

Friday March 30
11-32 p.m.
Eden went home ten minutes ago. She came round on a suprice visit, and found the flat in one hell of a mess. That's the trouble with suprice visits. You ever have that trouble? Bet you do. She wrinkled her nose and sfid that there was was an unhealthy smell. I hadn't notised it, which probably says more about me than it does her.
And she pointed out all these spiders that have moved in since she last came. The enough, a fair number of cobwebs have sprung up in the corners, but spiders keep the flies and bugs down, don't they? Well that was my excuse. She let it go without a fuss.
I love Eden.
She told me that her parents intended to christen her Eve, but decided in Eden less common. Never knew that. I like those little details.
The sex was okay, which means it wasn't okay. With me and Eden, the sex has always been a lot more then okay. Whatever. We fell asleeh. Bad move.

I woke up shuddering, my heart performing a bango [] rhythm. Eden just stared at me with big, scared eyes. She said I'd been talking and screaming in my sleap. Talking about God and the Devil and the Seven Sleepers - and the woman I was murdering. Jeez - no wonder Eden was frightened. Somehow, we calmed each other down with soothing words about dreams only being dreams, made coffee and small talk. And then we watched TV. Another bad move. There was a fresh report on the Dealer. He'd murdered a woman in her flat a mere couple of blocks away an hour before Eden arrived. Eden gave me this look. There was no obvious accusation in it. No real hint of fear. Just - this look. I knew she was thinking about the black-outs I've suffered since my late teens, but she didn't say a word. She gave me a half-smile and a half-hearted kiss, then I was looking at a closed door and listening to the dack of her heels receding down the corridor. I've been looking out the window for the best part of an hour. The rains eased off. Somewhere, out here, I thought, is the Dealer. Then I started to wonder about the Seven Sleepers. I'd read about them a long time ago. I was an avid reader once, before I flunked college and discovered the bottle. Maybe I'll pay Central Library a visit tomorrow. Then again, maebt I won't.

Saturday March 31
2-15 a.m.
Okay, it's not Saturday any more by the clock, but it FEELS like Saturday, all night?
Wokr was a bitch. Sparky was a bastard. They went well together. A twelve-hour shift, ending in two in the morning, and I stayed off the booze every minute of it. But Sparky was on my pack all the way, riding me about my attitude, how! washed the glasses, every damned thing. I bit my tongue and took it. I need the money.
I called Eden five or Six Times from work, when Sparky wasn't locking, and left messages on her ansaphone. I think I need Eden more then I love her.
I've been thinking about religion. The Dealer didn't kill anyone tonight. I never went to the library.

Sunday April 1
11-20 a.m.
Last night God came to me and told me to murder people. He was dressed as Santa Claus and wore dark glasses.
Maybe it was an April Fool's joke. Perhaps God has a black humour. You tell me. It was only a dream, I tell myself. Only a dream. I'm writing this in a bar. No, it's not Sparky's Bar. I never drink in Sparky's Bar, not on the other side of the [] counter anyway. I've damed my first whiskey of the day. I'll be drink soon, I hope.
Memories of Eden have banded together ganged upon me. I'm sitting, glass in one hand, pen in the other, staring back down the years. I see Eden in her blue raincoat and red scarf, leaning against the railings of the before, but for the forst time she smiles at me. Her smile is - Eden. Can't express it any better. That Eden smile saw me through months, years, as she rose higher and I sank lower.

If only I hadn't those black-outs -
There I go again. Excuses. Salf-pity. If I'm a loser, it's because I played the cards I was dealt badly, not because I was dealt bad cards.
It's started to rain again. I watched the puddles forming. There are a lot of empty glasses on my table. Can't remember how they all got there. Eden hasn't been answering my calls. Maybe that's why I'm eyeing the girl at the bar, her face frosted with powder, mouth slashed red with bright lipstick. She looks cheap - as in cheap by the hour.
Sometimes you take comfort whenever you can find it. Eden counterfeit comfort.
10-56 p.m.
She left my flat on hour ago, about the time my hangover wore off/ Her name was Angel. She said. For me, she was an angel for a while, a ministering angel. And she was my priestess-confessor. I told her everything. Told her stuff I daren't. Commit to paper. Everything. Sht didn't judgt. She didn't condemn. Oh sure, I know why - she didn't damn well CARE.

Doesn't matter. I feel-absolved, stupid as that sounds.
She had fresh bruises all over her body, some purple-angry. I asked her where she'd got them. "Part of the job", she replied, "Costommers get what they pay for." Angel was wearing small fortune in the slim shape of a watch. I recognized it as the one David Crane wore on the TV broadcast. When I pressed her about it she refused to admit anything - professional - confidence - but her expression told it all. The watch was from Crane, rock-idol and darling of the chat shows. The bruises were from him too.
I gad damn all money to give her. She didn't mind.
I whant to see Angel again.
I know I won't.
11-12 p.m.
Edens just phoned, asking if I wanted her come over.
I didn't want to see her.
I told her to come right round.

Monday April 2
11-23 p.m.
Yestrday, when I had sex with Angel, I hardly thought about Eden. I don't love Angel. Last night, when I made love to Eden, I thought about Angel all the time.
I love Eden.
Life is a Leonard Cohen song. [We speak in code because we think in reddles.] Eden was hardly throufh the door when she asked me about the black-outs. [When] Were they getting worse? I mumbled something or other. Then she took me by the hand and sat me down on the bed. And she smiled that Eden smile, that smile I saw years ago. When we were first-year college students. At that moment, I was certain of two things -
I ----- never love anyone as I loved Eden, and I was the last man Eden should have for a lover. It wasn't just that she was a winner and I was a loser. I'm not proud. I [couldn't] could live with that. No, it was more than that - in a rare instant of [reval] revelation, I knew that I was death. But I couldn't find the words to tell her. I'm still struggling to frame the words, explain the insight. What to say? That I'm Death himself, the Grim [Rap] Reaper?

No way - nothing so grand. Perhaps, in a way, I'm Death-for-some, except I'm not sure what that means. And I'm also a deadman, but I haven't much of a clue what I mean by that either. The revelation was just too damn big for words, let's leave it at that.
After a while I started to follow what Eden was saying. She was talking like a lovesaint.
she was telling about faith. Not chapel-and-bible faith, but human faith, faith between lovers. Eden was saying she was sorry for not trusting me, for suspucting that I might have caused-harm. Okay, she admitted, so I had black-outs-she'd seen plenty of then over the [] years - but I'd never hurt anyone while I was lost to the world. She put her arms around me and insisted that there was no dancer in me at all.
She was wrong, but I said nothing.
Somehow we ended up naked the sheets. Maybe that sounds like a phoney line, as it I suffered a lap-dissolve in a movie, but that's almost how it seemed to me - a shift from scene to scene.
A whole rabble of fears erupted inside my head. SHE MAKING LOVE TO DEATH, I thought. My love will kill her.
Dut what the hell was I spposed to do?
Claim to have a headache?

So I thought of Angel as I went through the actions with Eden. Somehow, Angel was immune. Death couldn't touch Angel. I KNOW it sounds crazy, but...
Sometime deep in the night, we fell asleep. And, of course, I dreamed me dreams. She shook me awake in the early morning, her face as pale as the down light. I'd been [] talking in my sleep, she scird. Screaming in my sleep. Like I was in hell. She asked me who the "Deliverer" was. The name sent a chill through me, although I couldn't figure out why.
After Eden left, I lay on the bed for a couple of hours, counting the cracks on the ceiling. Then I heard SYMPATHY FOR THE DEVIL on the CD player and I got out flat fast. In case you're wondering why I was so Spooked, I don't have any Rolling Stones' CDs. I went to the library a couple of hours before work, and took out four books on religion and mythology. Then I wndered around, looking for an old church, an empty church. Don't ask me why. Some abscure need. Who knows? I ended up in a mean area, above the Italian Steps. Narroe, crooked alley ways - not a lot of sky. I passed a window painted black and entered a small square with a dry fountain.

That's where I saw the church. It was one of those grey, neo-Gothic buildings with stained glass in the tall, tapering windows. The sign was the norse for wear and weather: ST SEPTIMUS. I walked up to the door - almost went in - then turned and walked away. When I finaly arrived at Sparky's, he gone me all kinds of hell for being an hour late. Can't blame him for that, much as I loathe the creep. Next time even one minute late - I get the sack. Won't break my heart.
Haven't read the library books yet.
I watched the TV.
The [Deliver] Dealer didn't kill anyone today.
I'm afraid to go to sleep.

Tuesday April 3
9-27 a.m.
I've made a decision. A FIRM decision.
Thing heve gone downhill I started this journal. Perhaps writing troubles down makes them worse. I don't know. I'll try a few day - maybe a week - of restricting, meself to a few breif notes a day. I wont bother reading the library books.
It came again last night.
11-36 p.m.
The Dealer killed a man tonight.

Wednewday April 4
10-50 p.m.
My day off work.
Eden rang. Told her I was catching up on sleep and best not to call round. She's better off without me.
Louise came banging on the door. Told him to go to hell. I'm better off without him. The dreams haven't done away. The [Deliv] Dealer didn't kill anyone today.

Thursday April 5
11-26 p.m.
Didn't sleep last night.
Droke a glass[es] at work but Sparky wasn't around.
Eden pgoned. Told her I was busy.
No merders.
Am [to] going to stay awake tonight.

Friday April 6
[11] 12-15 p.m.
Stayed awake.
Haven't read [lirb] library books.
Eden rang. Told her to leave it for a few days.
No murders.
Must sleep.
Something's happening to the [] electricity.
Death knocked on my door but I wouldn't let [] him in.
I'm no fool.

Saturday April 7
Slept till mid-day. Dreams getting worse. Coming neares.
No reports on the Dealer.
Went to St Septimus - [dind] didn't go in.
Eden didn't [crawl] call.
The lights are turning on and off jn their own.
I prayed to Angel before I went to bed. She sang me to sleep with on Ave Maria.
Deliver us from evil.
ON OFF. ON OFF.

Sunday April 8
Dreams still bad.
Note [sh] sure I wokr up.
I watched the light-switch for 2 hours. It didn't say a word.
Spiders everywhere.
The Deliverer killed a woman today.

[Sunday April]
Monday April 9
The clock keeps going round.
It want [teel] tell me the time.
Santa Claus gave a gun to me.
Let loose the puppies of war.
I died last night.

Tuesday April 10
Today was not a good day.

Wednesday April 11
My name is Ryan, and I'm afraid I'm losing my mind.
I'm sitting here, by my table, in [my may] my flat, writing very slowly. Very carefully.
Yesterday I took a step that either drove me insane or saved my sanity. I'm not sure [witch] which. Uesterday I accepted that the impossible might be true.
That Santa Claus might be real.
No. That's not it. Concentrate, Ryan. Concentrate.
I've read the books, I think it's evening now. Yes - it's evening.
God, there are spiders all over my flat - living room, kitchen, [], bathroom.
O, what tangled webs they weare...
Can't concentrate. Don't think I've eater for a week. The flat stinks. I stink. That stuff I wrote over the last [] week - must have been miles out of my head. Haven't left the flat for a week. I don't think. Hard to say.
I'll tell you the truth, it can keep my thought still - [] they're rowdy little boys running about in a slayground.
I haven't told you my secrets, not since I [] bought this journal. If you're reading this, you'll know what I've done to the cover. I put a title into the leather binding. It took me a long time, because [] I used my fingernails to cut out the words. My nails bled a lot the leather. Blood and skin. I cut out the title DIARY OF A MADMAN. Then I thought, about an hour ago, what if I'm not mad? What if the dreams are true? So I dig my nails in again, and sliced brackets around MAD, then cared a question mark. My nails are a bit title. Now I'll tell you the story of the story.
God didn't speak to me. Santa Claus, Blood jn his Beard.
No. I'm loosing it again. Must get out of the fkat. Eat. I'll tell you [latter] later. Yes go out. Go ti churcg. Church.

12-15 a.m.
I'm sane, for the moment. As sane as I get, that is. These bouts of sanity don't last long. So I'll write fast while I [sit] still have my marbles.
I went out three, maybe four hour ago. I must have eaten - my stomach feels full. Enough of that. I went to the church - to St Septimus. While I was climbing the Italian Steps I heard following footsteps. Didn't take any notice at first - no reasons to. Then I stumbled over a step. The footfalls stopped. I looked back into the dark. The dark was too dark, it hid whoever was there. I carried on. The tracking footsteps started again. I stopped. They stopped. IT continued on. They followed. Just like in the movies.
Imagination, you say? The imagination of a madman? I don't think so. You weren't there. You don't know what happened next.
The door of St Septimus was open. Wide open. At first I thought there was a late service, but I discovered the lights where off when I slipped inside. There were plenty of candles, congregated on the alter, in shrines, at the feet of statues. Not a soul in sight, and those lighted candles. What church leaves it's doors wide open at night with the light off and the candles burning? Make sense to you? I know I wasn't mad at the moment.
I'm SURE I wasn't.
When you're inside a church, you walk quietly, don't you? I moved softly all the way down the nave eyes fixed on the alter. Then I heard muffled steps behind me.
I soun round at the instant the back of the church went dark in a sputter of dozens of candles. There were two candle-racks at the rear of the church, one each side of the door, some twenty feet apart. And the candles went out at the same moment. Whoever was back there had quenched the flames SIMULTANEOUSLY. Then I thought, there must be two people back there.
Although two individuals acting in synchronicity, extinguishing at least twenty flames each, and all in a microsecond, was as wild a notion as a single man with twenty-foot-span arms.
I waited there, near the alter rails, for someone to move, speak, even BREATHE...
Nothing.
The waiting game got too much for my jangled nerves.
"Anyone there?" I called out.

Answer came there none, as the poet would say. But there was a powerful sence of - what shall I call it - BAD PRESENCE. Yes, a bad presence in the dark at the back of the church.
I admit I was scared. Maybe you think you wouldn't have been. But you weren't there. I hesitated, not knowing wether to advance or retreat.
Then the blindingly obvious struck me. If I hadn't been enfeebled by my week in Limbo I would have realized earlier. There were scores of candles in the rest of the church. More than enough to enlighten the blackness around the door. As they put it in the very worst of novels - some blasphemous, tenebrous miasma lay upon the benighted air.
Let's just say the back of the church was black as sin.
That's when I tasted raw dread on my tongue.
Fear can make you act like a hero as easily as a coward. The spun of terror drove me to attack, not retreat.
Another flip of the coin and I'd have run in the opposite direction just as fast.
I raced at the cougulated, blackness, shouting my head off. I've no idea what I shouted. Some token defiance, I suppose.

The darkness split in two the instant I plunged into it. I glimpsed a fleeing something or other to the right, darting down the side of the nave.
And I saw, much more clearly, a man streak out of the arched doorway. By the time I was out in the open, he was gone.
But his after-image stuck in my brain. As I caught my breath, I settled on that image, and a smell that accompanied it. In the dark behind my eyes, I saw the man's face pale and vivid, and the smell - the unmistakable, coppery scent of blood.
Yes, my mind's clear now. I can sense the clarity of as I write. I hope my sanity remains long enough for me to tell you all I know.
I saw his face, and smell the blood, yes. But there was one more detail. His suit, as far as I could discern, was dark and unremarkable, but there was something sticking from an oversized breast-pocket. A playing card, I couldn't be certain, but I'd lay long odds that it was the Queen of Hearts. The huge breast-pocket bulged fit to burst. I didn't take much note of that at the time.
Not until I got back home and switched an the TV.

The news came on ten minutes later. The first report was of the Dealer. He'd claimed another victim. A middle-aged woman, Lisa Carrock, ,other of three, her heart cut out, and another heart - the previous victims pushed into the carity, along with a card: The Queen of Spades. The woman was black. The Dealer's special brand of humour. Site of the murder: The Italian Steps district.
That's when I remembered the big, big breast-pocket. Big enough for the roomiest hearts. As for the card...
The Queen of Hearts was for his next victim. A woman who deals in love, perhaps? Angel?
No - could be any number of women.
I waited almost on hour then a fresh report came in. Another victim, on the city's east side: Julia, Rivelo, her heart replaced by Lisa Carrock's, with the Queen of Hearts as the Dealer's calling card.
Mixed with the revulsion - and sympathy was a small dash of relief: relief that I wasn't the Dealer. With my lost days, I'd begun to fear that a Mr.Hyde had been loosed in me.
Didn't you wonder that, if only for a moment.

But I had another cause for relief. The voices in my dreams had been validated. They'd told me to kill this bastard. Oh yeah, I'd seen him before in dreams. in terrible dreams. Sometimes I killed him. Sometimes he killed me. But whenever we met, in dreams there was death. Well, Dealer, I'll show you a new pack of cards. The Tarot pack. The trump card is Death. And Death's also the name of the game. There's coincidence and coincidence, and tonight's streak of dark flukes was to much to put down happenstance. Something has guided me to St.Septimus.
I know that psychotic murderers hear voices in their heads, commands from their dreams, ordering them to kill for God or the Devil. That's what's terrified me these past few weeks.
But this was different. This was like being asked to kill Hitler.
God, I'm tired. I need to get my strength back.
Tonight, I won't be afraid to sleep.
Tomorrow, where shall I start out on the hunt? St Septimus?
Yes, St Septimus.

Thursday April 12
11-05 p.m.
Eleven-o-clock and all's not well.
I've just read what I wrote last night. Whaqt confident words! Today, I'm not so sure, although I've managed to keep my grip on reality.
I went to St Septimus, But I was haunted by a number, every step I took. The number seven. No, I'm not superstitious. I'ts something from the dream. The killing dream. I think I'm being asked to kill-execute-more than the Dealer.
Those library books - when I finally read them - stirred up some sludge in my mind, murky images of a dream. I saw the Seven Deadky Sins in human form, wearing masks. As for the Seven Sleepers of Ephesus, legedary Christian martyrs hidden in a cave, lying in suspended ani,ation, bicting the time of their return - I'm not so sure.
Could mean something. Could mean nothing/ Maybe it's the number that matters, Seven. It's one of those sacred numbers after all...
Seven days in a week. Seven seas. Seven Deadly Sins.
Seven Brides for Seven Brothres?
Right - real funny.

St Septimus was as empty by day by night. I sat in the front pew for an hour, then scoured the church for clues, coming up with nada. Looking for the priest, I tried the door to the sacristy, but it was locked. That's when I REALLY started to wonder about the pastor of St Septimus. Why was his church left unsupervised? I left that I was being watched, in that quiet church. Sure, that's the oldest feeling in the book, unusually unfounded. Whatever, I had the strong sensation that something or someone was doserving me. To tell the truth, I suspected that even the STATUES were staring at me.
Such grotesque statues, too... A blind archangel, with broken wings. A saint with a hinged skull sprouting out his collar. A cherubim with two heads.
As for the stained - glass windows, it took me some time to work out the bewildering displays - chaotic, at first glance. Then I grasped the underlying motif in each window: heaven and hell. Fair enough, you might think. Except heaven was in the lower half of each window and hell was upper. Hell looked down on heaven.
Demons lorded it over saints.
God and the Church of St Septimus were obviously not on the best of terms.
But all this grotesquerie didn't point me the way to the Dealer.

I sat down near the altar, ready to duck in the towel for the day. Not a clue in sight. Then it hit me, and I cursed myself for my stupidity. It was in a name:
St Septimus.
Septimus: Seven.
That number again.
Killing the Dealer - I'd be willing to play God on that score. Right or wrong, I'd do it - if only to spare future victims.
But if there were six others...
Seven slaughters...
No. No way. That would make a serial killer of ME.
I won't do it.
I won't.
I've just realised something-tomorrow's
Friday the thirteenth. I'm not superstitious, but...
The bedside lamp has just turned itself on.
The open bed is a trap, waiting for me to fall right in.
There's a spider on the pillow.

Friday April 13
3-15 p.m.
I lost my mind this morning. It was a hard fight to get it back. He's coming nearer, that being in the dream, the one I thought was Santa Claus when my wits were in bedlam.
He has a red robe, a hooded red robe. And that's about all he has in common with Father Christman. I don't think this guy is bringing me any presents.
There's a remorseless quality about him. Stern - Inhuman. Maybe he's the Devil, after all. His voice was remote, like a monastic bell from a coastal island. He said he was coming for me tonight. I distinguished two move words: Arachne... Deliverer...
I'm glancing at the spiders in my room, the festoons of cobwebs. I think I can guess what Arachne signifies. As for the identify of the simply look in a mirror.
The light-bulb keeps flickering on and off. At this rate, it'll be strobing before midnight. The microwave has just turned itself on.
I think I know who's behind the electrical anomalies:
Me.
Microwave Man.
I'm changing. I can feel it. But I can't tell whether I'm going mad of doing a butterfly from chrysalis number. Hell - I haven't even crossed out a single word my wits? No, on second thoughts, it doesn't mean a thing.
I'm afraid.
I'm growing, metamorphosing into - God knows what. Or I'm becoming a complete madman.
Either way - I'm afraid.
A spider has spun a web over my pillow.
11-50 p.m.
I'm still looking at the web on my pillow. I think I'm begginning to understand the pattern.
We speak in code because we think in riddles.
Arachne... in Greek mythology, a mainden transformed into a spider. Arachne, spinner of webs.
Webs.
Dreams.
The Seven.
It's swirling round in my skull.
I read an ancient gnostic gospel a shot while back, The Gospel of Truth. There's a passage in it that's known as the Nightmare Parable. I found a lot of unnerving echoes in it. Here - I'll write part of it down:
...they lived as if they were sink in sleep and pound themselves in disturbing dreams. Either there is a place to which they are fleeing... or they are striking blows, a receiving blows themselves, or they have fallen from high places... Sometimes people seem to be murdering them, though there is no one even pursuing them, or they themselves are killing their neighbours, for they have been stained with their blood...
The writer of that gospel viewed human life as a sleep of ignorance. And ignorance the source of evil.
So shuld O listen to - dreams?
God - the panic's corring back. I'm going crazy - or inhumanly sane. God help me, either ways.
Sleep.
Sleep's dragging me down.
Angel - Eden - help me. Don't let midnight strike!
I renounce everything. I'll burn my books. Eden, I'm falling.
Falling. Sleep Dream Web.

Saturday April 14
My name is Ryan.
I am the Deliverer.
I am an executioner.
Hunter of the Seven.
It's like killing Hittler.

Things to remember:
Door Code - 5106
Garbage - Wednesday.
Edens Birthday - 17th Feb.
Network password - Blackdragon.

 

Извиняюсь, всё не проверял, только пропущенные слова (но опечатки в тексте есть).

Все пропущенные участки:

I recognized it as the one David Crane
The watch was from Crane
I would never love anyone as I loved Eden
Somehow, Angel was immune.
Louise came banging on the door.
Eden didn't crawlcall
I took a step that either drove me insane or saved my sanity.
they're rowdy little boys running about in a slayground.
I put a title into the leather binding
I must have eaten - my stomach feels full
I moved softly all the way down the nave eyes fixed on the alter
and all in a microsecond, was as wild a notion as a single man
As they put it in the very worst of novels
darting down the side of the nave.

 

Вот здесь есть читабельный текст дневника, надо только спойлеры разворачивать.
А очепятки - Райан в дневнике делает орфографические ошибки, так что это в тему ))
http://www.rpgcodex.net/forums/index.php?threads/diary-of-a-mad-man-a-codexian-nightmare-dreamweb-completed.78334/#post-2385886

 

Я про те, которых в дневнике не было - такие как "Eden didn't crank" вместо "crawl".

kirik-82 многие уже исправил.

 

Да, есть такое дело. С него я тоже часть текста переписал, но там уже переботанный дневник. Часть текста переписана и большая часть просто выброшена. Кстати, написание оригинального текста от руки значительно отличается от нового, набранного рукописным шрифтом. В общем, считаю, что переводить следует оригинал.

 

Всем привет!
Выкладываю перевод файла r26, незаконченного на нотабеноиде.
+ Необходимо отредактировать все переводы, унифицировать ты/вы итд

 

это самая интересная и долгоиграющая часть, обычно =)

 

Не знал, что перевод закончили. В ближайшее время попробую собрать работающую версию, но учтите, что в ScummVM она работать не будет, только в DOSBox'е.

UPD: Нет, я погорячился. Сперва нужно вычитать текст и исправить ошибки.

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По переводу есть некоторые вопросы. Я предлагаю тем, кто принимал участие в переводе, а также другим заинтересованным лицам собраться в Jabber-конференции dw-rus@conference.jabber.ru и обсудить их.

 

Steel Pampers, я "ниасилила" Jabber. Пыталась подключиться где-то в марте. Насколько это актуально, и может проще в скайпе? мой контакт в профайле.

 

Ну как хоть какой перевод имеется собраный?